What\'s the best and worst birthday you\'ve ever had?
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First the best birthday that I\'ve had is to gather all of friends in the same class for a birthday party. I used to do it at an hamburger shop, following that I could make a friend. On the other hand the worst thing is when locking me in a trunk and driving in the parking station. And then I was throwing up. Hahaha :)
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Wonderful Wednesday to you, Elic! Anyone who keeps learning stays young. The greatest thing in life is to keep your mind young. You did great today. ^^ Always remember that I am always here for you.
First the best birthday that I\'ve had is to gather all of friends in the same class for a birthday party.
>> The best birthday party I have ever had was when me and my friends were all gathered together during my birthday party.
I used to do it at an hamburger shop, following that I could make a friend.
>> I used to celebrate my birthday in a Hamburger place wherein I can also make some new friends.
On the other hand the worst thing is when locking me in a trunk and driving in the parking station. And then I was throwing up.
>> On the other hand, the worst birthday I have ever had was when I was locked up in a car trunk while my friend was driving the car. I can\'t help but to throw up.
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