What\'s the best birthday gift you ever received?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a ring that my grandmother gave me it for my birthday. It\'s because the ring was made of white gold. I didn\'t need so expensive gift, but she wanted to present for me. So I was so thank you to my grandmother. When it was her birthday, I gave her clothes, shoes and muffler. And this year, I\'ll give her bag or ring.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cindy!
Thanks for accompli[이름]g your homework. I hope you receive another great present on your next birthday. :)
~T. Maine
>>It\'s a ring that my grandmother gave me for my birthday.
It\'s because the ring was made of white gold.
>>Correct.
I didn\'t need so expensive gift, but she wanted to present for me.
>>I didn\'t need a very expensive gift, but she wanted to give it to me as a present.
So I was so thank you to my grandmother.
>>So I was so thankful for my grandmother.
When it was her birthday, I gave her clothes, shoes and muffler.
>>When it was her birthday, I gave her some clothes, shoes, and a muffler.
And this year, I\'ll give her bag or ring.
>>And this year, I\'ll giver her a bag or a ring.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.