What\'s the best birthday gift you\'ve ever received? Why do you like it?
학생이 쓴 원문
The best birthday gift I received is LEGO robot that my mother and father bought me, because I wanted to have for a long time.
Second, my uncle gave it to me, the gift is a green drone, because I can control it myself.
Third, it is LEGO mincraft zombie figures that my aunt gave me. It is a gift I asked to aunt.
강사 첨삭
Hello again, Jimmy!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What\'s the best birthday gift you\'ve ever received? Why do you like it?
The best birthday gift I received is LEGO robot that my mother and father bought me, because I wanted to have for a long time.
>> The best birthday gift I received was a LEGO robot that my mother and father bought me because I wanted to have it for a long time.
Second, my uncle gave it to me, the gift is a green drone, because I can control it myself.
>> Second is the drone my uncle gave me, and I like it because I can control it myself.
Third, it is LEGO mincraft zombie figures that my aunt gave me. It is a gift I asked to aunt.
>> Third is the LEGO Minecraft zombie figures that my aunt gave me. It is a gift I asked my aunt.
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