What\'s the best Christmas you\'ve ever had?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well....I\'d love to talk about the story of ex-girl friend. I still remember when traveling to Dae gwan lyeong with her. You know, there\'s known for a sheep ranch. So, we tried to fed the sheep and walked in the field. The funny thing is after we saw around there and on the way down, we saw a place that sells the lamb skewers. It was really absurd, but it snowed on the way to the dorm after eating that. So, I had an white Christmas with her. :)
강사 첨삭
Wonderful day to you, Elic! A little progress each day adds up to big results. Always believe in yourself. I appreciate your hard work. Keep it up! I am rooting for you.
Well....I\'d love to talk about the story of ex-girl friend.
>>> I\'d love to talk about the story of my ex girlfriend.
I still remember when traveling to Dae gwan lyeong with her.
>>> I still remember when we traveled to Dae Gwan Lyeong.
You know, there\'s known for a sheep ranch. So, we tried to fed the sheep and walked in the field.
>>> There\'s a known sheep ranch in that city, so we tried to feed the sheep, and after that, we walked around the field.
The funny thing is after we saw around there and on the way down, we saw a place that sells the lamb skewers.
>>> The funny thing was that, after we went to the sheep ranch, on our way home, we saw a place that sells lamb skewers.
It was really absurd, but it snowed on the way to the dorm after eating that. So, I had an white Christmas with her. :)
>>> It was really absurd, but it snowed on the way to the dorm after eating lamb skewers. So, I had a white Christmas with her. :)
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