What\'s the best company benefit or perk you\'ve received at your job so far?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can choose two things.
One is what I went to Jeju-island for workshop.
The other is the health check with my spouse.
The traveling was not interesting, at that time. But,I change my mind now.
I was a benefit. because, I didn’t do work the day. The policy is not from now my company.But The other one is it.
My husband can do health check more detail.
I think health is more important as getting older.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Stella! Both options were good. It was great that the company offers these perks to their employees. ^^ Thank you for doing homework. Have a great day ahead!
~T. Jewel
I can choose two things.
>>I can choose between two things
One is what I went to Jeju-island for workshop.
>>The first option was going to Jeju Island for a workshop.
The other is the health check with my spouse.
The other is the health check with my spouse.
>>The other option was a health checkup with my spouse.
The traveling was not interesting, at that time. But,I change my mind now.
The traveling was not interesting, at that time. But,I change my mind now.
>>The trip wasn’t interesting at the time, but I’ve changed my mind now.
I was a benefit. because, I didn’t do work the day.
I was a benefit. because, I didn’t do work the day.
>>It was a benefit because I didn’t have to work that day.
The policy is not from now my company.But The other one is it.
>>The policy is not from my company, but the other one is.
My husband can do health check more detail.
My husband can do health check more detail.
>>My husband got a more detailed health checkup.
I think health is more important as getting older.
I think health is more important as getting older.
>>I think health becomes more important as we get older.
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