What\'s the best documentary film you\'ve seen so far?
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The documentary \"meeting you\" is the story about a mother and her daughter who died at 7 years old. The team made the avatar figure through 3-D scanning of a child model based on her photos and videos. They also reproduced her voice by using similar voices from child actors. The mother wasn\'t just sad but wanted to meet the child again, because she died only a week after her diagnosis of a mysterious illness. The mother wanted to do something for her but she couldn\'t do anything. During the reunion, the mother had a chance to say goodbye that she was not able to say to her daughter in person before her sudden death. I couldn\'t watch this video because it was really painful to watch it. I could understand how the mother has been suffering. It broke my heart and make me cry. The mother took interview at the end of the program and told her daughter didn\'t look like her but she felt really happy because she could talk to her daughter that might have her mind. It was sad for me but it was
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The documentary \"meeting you\" is the story about a mother and her daughter who died at 7 years old.
>>> The documentary \"Meeting You\" is the story about a mother and her daughter who died at 7 years old.
The team made the avatar figure through 3-D scanning of a child model based on her photos and videos.
>>> CORRECT
They also reproduced her voice by using similar voices from child actors.
>>> CORRECT
The mother wasn\'t just sad but wanted to meet the child again, because she died only a week after her diagnosis of a mysterious illness.
>>> The mother wasn\'t just sad but wanted to meet the child again, because she died only after a week of her diagnosis of a mysterious illness.
The mother wanted to do something for her but she couldn\'t do anything.
>>> CORRECT
During the reunion, the mother had a chance to say goodbye that she was not able to say to her daughter in person before her sudden death.
>>> CORRECT
I couldn\'t watch this video because it was really painful to watch it.
>>> I couldn\'t watch this video because it was really painful to watch.
I could understand how the mother has been suffering.
>>> CORRECT
It broke my heart and make me cry.
>>> It broke my heart and made me cry.
The mother took interview at the end of the program and told her daughter didn\'t look like her but she felt really happy because she could talk to her daughter that might have her mind.
>>> CORRECT
It was sad for me but it was...
>>> CORRECT
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