What’s the best hobby anyone could have?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think anyone could have a hobby. I think the best hobby is running. Running is a very simple and easy sport. We could improve our bodies by running. And If we do this sport, we improve lung capacity and lose weight.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Jay!
When I was reading your homework, I realized one thing: I NEED TO RUN!
Thank you for your diligence and passion to do your homework every day. I appreciate it a lot.
see you in class!
T. Aki~
I think anyone could have a hobby.>>> CORRECT!
I think the best hobby is running.
>>> CORRECT!
Running is a very simple and easy sport.
>>> CORRECT!
We could improve our bodies by running.
>>> CORRECT!
And If we do this sport, we improve lung capacity and lose weight.
>>> If we do this sport or activity, we are imporving our lung capacity and lose some weight.
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