What’s the best hobby anyone could have?
학생이 쓴 원문
A exercises is the best hobbies, especially running is the best.
Because, it don\'t need any goods. it only need foot and shoes.
And also it is helpful for our health. so it\'s a best hobby.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing one of the best hobbies anyone could have. I do hope you also keep yourself healthy.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
A exercises is the best hobbies, especially running is the best.
>>Exercise is one of the best hobbies, especially running.
Because, it don\'t need any goods. it only need foot and shoes.
>>It doesn\'t require any equipment; only your feet and shoes are needed.
And also it is helpful for our health. so it\'s a best hobby.
>>Additionally, it is beneficial for our health, making it an excellent hobby.
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