What\'s the best lifestyle for a retiree in Korea?
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Some retiree tend to back to their hometown.
However, someone comeback again from hometown to the city.
They have lived in the city for a longtime.
But, usually the hometown for them is rural site.
So, they have longing at hometown, but they feel uncomfortable in rural.
Anyway, I believe that just stay is more better.
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Some retiree tend to back to their hometown.
>> Some retirees tend to go back to their hometown.
However, someone comeback again from hometown to the city.
>> However, some of them return to the city again.
They have lived in the city for a longtime.
>> They have lived in the city for a long time.
But, usually the hometown for them is rural site.
>> Usually, their hometown is a rural area.
So, they have longing at hometown, but they feel uncomfortable in rural.
>> So, they feel nostalgic about their hometown, but they feel uncomfortable living in a rural place.
Anyway, I believe that just stay is more better.
>> Anyway, I believe that staying in one place is better.
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