What\'s the best martial art for someone your age to practice?
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I think the best martial art for someone my age is Taekwondo and Hapkido because once I learning Taekwondo so I think it is easy.
And Hapkido is similar on Taekwondo.
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What\'s the best martial art for someone your age to practice?
I think the best martial art for someone my age is Taekwondo and Hapkido because once I learning Taekwondo so I think it is easy.
>> I think the best martial arts for someone my age are Taekwondo and Hapkido because I learned Taekwondo once and I thought it was easy.
And Hapkido is similar on Taekwondo.
>> And Hapkido is similar to Taekwondo.
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