What\'s the best pet for kids these days?
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I think that puppy is the best for kids. Because dogs are in similar size with the baby. Also, they are not dangerous. So, I think that babies can be the best friend with puppy because they grow together.
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I think that puppy is the best for kids. Because dogs are in similar size with the baby.
>> I think that puppies are the best for kids because they are similar in size to babies.
Also, they are not dangerous.
>> correct
So, I think that babies can be the best friend with puppy because they grow together.
>> So, I believe that babies and puppies can be best friends because they grow together.
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