What\'s the best restaurant you\'ve ever been to? What made it so good?

2019-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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The best restaurant i ever gone is paella-restaurant in spain. I went to there in july during honeymoon. The beer taste great when I drink it with paella. There was to be many people. I thought the reastaurant was popular place in the city. The reasons I thought to do that restaurant food price is attractive. All menu goes well wine. Also, all people who working in there are very kind. If I ask anything to them, they explain to me in detail. Finally the food is fresh. They have handle mainly seafood. As you knew, the most important of seafood is clean

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]^^

Wow, I would love to visit that restaurant.

I am also a fan of seafood!!!

Talk to you later and thank you.


The best restaurant i ever gone is paella-restaurant in spain.
>>The best restaurant I went to is the Paela Resort in Spain.
I went to there in july during honeymoon.
>>I went there on my honeymoon in July.
The beer taste great when I drink it with paella.
>>The beer tastes great when you drink it with Paella.
There was to be many people.
>>There were too many people.
I thought the reastaurant was popular place in the city.
>>I thought the restaurant was a popular place in the city.
The reasons I thought to do that restaurant food price is attractive.
>>The reason why I thought about paying for the restaurant\'s food is attractive.
All menu goes well wine.
>>Wine is a good match for all menus.
Also, all people who working in there are very kind.
>>Also, everyone who works there is very kind.
If I ask anything to them, they explain to me in detail.
>>When I ask them anything, they explain it to me in detail.
Finally the food is fresh.
>>The food is all fresh.
They have handle mainly seafood.
>>They deal mainly with seafood.
As you knew, the most important of seafood is clean.
>>As you knew, seafood must be clean.

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