What\'s the best restaurant you\'ve ever been to? What made it so good?
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Hello Mr. [이름]^^
Wow, I would love to visit that restaurant.
I am also a fan of seafood!!!
Talk to you later and thank you.
The best restaurant i ever gone is paella-restaurant in spain.
>>The best restaurant I went to is the Paela Resort in Spain.
I went to there in july during honeymoon.
>>I went there on my honeymoon in July.
The beer taste great when I drink it with paella.
>>The beer tastes great when you drink it with Paella.
There was to be many people.
>>There were too many people.
I thought the reastaurant was popular place in the city.
>>I thought the restaurant was a popular place in the city.
The reasons I thought to do that restaurant food price is attractive.
>>The reason why I thought about paying for the restaurant\'s food is attractive.
All menu goes well wine.
>>Wine is a good match for all menus.
Also, all people who working in there are very kind.
>>Also, everyone who works there is very kind.
If I ask anything to them, they explain to me in detail.
>>When I ask them anything, they explain it to me in detail.
Finally the food is fresh.
>>The food is all fresh.
They have handle mainly seafood.
>>They deal mainly with seafood.
As you knew, the most important of seafood is clean.
>>As you knew, seafood must be clean.
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