What\'s the best thing about elementary first graders?
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My best thing about elementary first garders first, first graders friends are kind.
Second, first graders teacher is very smart.
Third, class time is 4th peried, it is very short.
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What\'s the best thing about elementary first graders?
My best thing about elementary first garders first, first graders friends are kind.
>> The best things about elementary first graders are, first, my first-grader classmates are kind.
Second, first graders teacher is very smart.
>> Second, my first-grader teachers are very smart.
Third, class time is 4th peried, it is very short.
>> Third, the 4th-period class time is very short.
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