What\'s the best thing about your childhood?Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
The best thing of about my childhood first, there was not homework so I don\'t write a homework in my house.
Second, I have a lot of time to play with my friends.
Third, my childhood friend was very friendly.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s another corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good evening there!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What\'s the best thing about your childhood? Explain.
The best thing of about my childhood first, there was not homework so I don\'t write a homework in my house.
>> The best things about my childhood are, first, there was no homework so I didn\'t do homework in my house.
Second, I have a lot of time to play with my friends.
>> Second, I had a lot of time to play with my friends.
Third, my childhood friend was very friendly.
>> OR: Third, I was close to my childhood friends.
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