What’s the best thing about yourself?

2018-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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August.10.2018 Please check your homework below (ANSWER THE QUESTIONS INTO 3-4 SENTENCES) >>> What’s the best thing about yourself? I would like to meet my friends and talk with them for advice. I’m good listener when serious conversation and I usually try to understand other’s minds because I can feel close too from people and more empathically. I have found that I’m interested in foreign languages such as English, Chinese, Vietnamese. While I’m helping foreign students who come to study Korean.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Yeong ^^

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I would like to meet my friends and talk with them for advice. I’m good listener when serious conversation and I usually try to understand other’s minds because I can feel close too from people and more empathically. I have found that I’m interested in foreign languages such as English, Chinese, Vietnamese. While I’m helping foreign students who come to study Korean.

>> I would like to meet my friends and talk with them for an advice. I’m a good listener when a serious conversation comes up  and I usually try to understand other’s minds /situation because I can feel their situations sometimes. I have found that I’m interested in studying  foreign languages such as English, Chinese, Vietnamese and also I like helping foreign students who will come to study Korean.

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