What\'s the best thing that happened to you recently?

2019-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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One of best thing was my new part time job. Because, before this, I felt bored many times and thought about return to Korea as well. But, it is not anymore. My new job is really fabulous to me. There are no many stress and hard things. I am tired sometimes while I work in there, but I am really feeling better than before.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jay!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

One of best thing was my new part time job. 

>> One of best thing that happened to me recently is getting my new part time job. 

Because, before this, I felt bored many times and thought about return to Korea as well.

>> Before this, I felt very bored and also thought about returning to Korea.
But, it is not anymore. 

>> This is not the case anymore.

My new job is really fabulous to me. 

>> My new job is really fabulous for me. 

There are no many stress and hard things. 

>> There are no stress and things are not hard.

I am tired sometimes while I work in there, but I am really feeling better than before.

>> I am tired sometimes while working there, but I am really feeling so much better than before.

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