What\'s the best thing that happened to you recently?
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Hello Jay!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
One of best thing was my new part time job.
>> One of best thing that happened to me recently is getting my new part time job.
Because, before this, I felt bored many times and thought about return to Korea as well.
>> Before this, I felt very bored and also thought about returning to Korea.
But, it is not anymore.
>> This is not the case anymore.
My new job is really fabulous to me.
>> My new job is really fabulous for me.
There are no many stress and hard things.
>> There are no stress and things are not hard.
I am tired sometimes while I work in there, but I am really feeling better than before.
>> I am tired sometimes while working there, but I am really feeling so much better than before.
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