What’s the best thing to keep your skin smooth?

2015-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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When I was young, in the winter, my hands used to be chapped. Because of that, I felt itching and often scratched my hands. But I don't have a chapped hand anymore now. In order to have smooth hands, I have been trying to do two things. Firstly, From the time I bleed from my hands, I began to apply hand cream or lotion after washing hands as much as possible. Especially in the winter and when I use hand dryer, which makes my hands dry, in toilet. It is important to keep my hands watery, which ultimately can make them smooth. Secondly, I try to sleep as early as possible. Although it is difficult for most people to sleep early, having a habit of sleeping early is essential to protect our skin from ageing since our skin recovers between 10 p.m and 2 a.m; thus, it is better to fall asleep early. I can keep my skin smooth. There are diverse method to keep someone's skin silky, but in my case, the best way is applying hand cream and falling asleep early that keep my skin smooth.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss [이름]! Thank you for sending this in. I hope that you will maintaina  porcelain skin forever. kkk Have  a great day! ~Kelly^^ When I was young, in the winter, my hands used to be chapped. >> Correct. Because of that, I felt itching and often scratched my hands. >> Because of that, it felt itchy and often scratched my hands. But I don\'t have a chapped hand anymore now. >> But I don\'t have a chapped hand anymore. In order to have smooth hands, I have been trying to do two things. >> Correct.Firstly, From the time I bleed from my hands, I began to apply hand cream or lotion after washing hands as much as possible. >> Firstly, From the time my hands bled, I began to apply hand cream or lotion after washing hands as much as possible.  Especially in the winter and when I use hand dryer, which makes my hands dry, in toilet. >> Especially in the winter and when I use a hand dryer, it makes my hands dry. It is important to keep my hands watery, which ultimately can make them smooth. >> It is important to keep my hands moist, to make them feel smooth.Secondly, I try to sleep as early as possible. >> Correct. Although it is difficult for most people to sleep early, having a habit of sleeping early is essential to protect our skin from ageing since our skin recovers between 10 p.m and 2 a.m; thus, it is better to fall asleep early. >> Correct. I can keep my skin smooth. >> Correct.There are diverse method to keep someone\'s skin silky, but in my case, the best way is applying hand cream and falling asleep early that keep my skin smooth. >> There are diverse methods to keep someone\'s skin silky, but in my case, the best way is applying hand cream and falling asleep early that keeps my skin smooth. 

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