What\'s the best transportation when you go on a trip with friends?
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I think the best transportation when go on a trip with friends is train because train is very fast.
So very fast reach our destination.
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What\'s the best transportation when you go on a trip with friends?
I think the best transportation when go on a trip with friends is train because train is very fast. So very fast reach our destination.
>> I think the best transportation when we go on a trip with friends is the train because it\'s very fast so we can reach our destination early.
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