What\'s the best way to kill time among your age group?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the many elementary schools students the best way to kill time is playing with friends because playing with friends is fun.
But I\'m not many playing with my friends.
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What\'s the best way to kill time among your age group?
I think the many elementary schools students the best way to kill time is playing with friends because playing with friends is fun.
>> I think for many elementary school students, playing with friends is the best way to kill time because it\'s fun.
But I\'m not many playing with my friends.
>> But I don\'t play with my friends.
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