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I think the best way is to get rid of prejudice. There are two reasons to support my opinion.
>> Correct.
The first reason is bebeficial.
>> The first reason is beneficial.
If we have pregudice constantly, our society would be simple since it is created by a person or a group.
>> If there is no prejudice, our society will be simple since it is composed of persons or group of people.
The second reason is that removing prejudice helps us widen perspectives.
>> The second reason is that removing prejudice helps us widen our perspectives.
By removing it, we can have a chance to get different opinions and perspectives with other.
>> By eradicating it, we can have a chance to get different opinions and perspectives from others.
As a result, I think get rid of prejudice is the best way to stamp out discrimination.
>> Correct.
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