What\'s the best way to stop being bored?
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The best way to stop being bored is meeting friends.
>> CORRECT
OR >> The best way to stop being bored is to meet friends.
Friends usually makes me more energetic.
>> My friends usually make me more energetic.
I could go biking, go movie, or having nice dinner with them.
>> I can go biking, watch a movie, or have a nice dinner with them.
They keep me pleasant.
>> They make me feel happy.
Having a conversation with people who have bright smiles and cheerful attitude gave me positive energy to get over tedium and even depression.
>> Having a conversation with people who have bright smiles and cheerful attitude gives me a positive energy to get over tedium and even depression.
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