What\'s the best way to stop being bored?
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Thanks for answering the question Sir [이름]! You are right. Working out is the best
solution to stop the boredom. I do work out too. And it\'s so satisfying. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
In my case, I prefer to do exercise rather than stay at home.
>> In my case, I prefer to do exercise rather than to stay at home.
There are a lot of things to do, when we feel bored.
>> CORRECT
Some people like watching TV or movies lied down on the sofa.
>> Some people like watching TV or movies while lying down on the sofa.
Others love going out to hang out with close friends or working out like me.
>> Others love to hang out with close friends or to work out like what I do.
I think that all people feel bored if they do repeated work.
So, we must have at least one hobby that we do after work.
However, some experts think there is something good about feeling bored that can encourage people to do something.
So, We don\'t have to be worried about being bored.
I think boredom is a very useful emotion.
It\'s an emotion which spurs people on to
change something about their environment.
>> CORRECT
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