What’s the biggest adventure you’ve had in your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
My biggest adventure was visiting Warhol in Australia
Living in a new place was not easy, but it was a fun experience.
강사 첨삭
Hello Yu Li!
I envy you! I\'ve heard of that place before and saw some pictures on the internet. It seems like a really lovely place. Anyway, thanks for the time and effort you took to write this. See you in our next class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Living in a new place was not easy, but it was a fun experience.
Living in a new place was not easy, but it was a fun experience.
>>CORRECT!
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