What\'s the biggest lie you have ever told? Was it ever discovered?
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Miss lynn I do not want to talk about my lies. Instead, I can tell you the biggest lie my friend had told to me. I was letting my friend borrow my tape. After she used it, she just ran away with it. I then saw her putting the tape inside my best friend\'s backpack. Then she ran off. So I asked my best friend if I could look into her bag. She said yes. I was suddenly angry at my friend, (not my best friend) so I found her at her desk. Then she lied, \"I put it at your desk! I never know your best friend too!\" How mean is that? I cant belive it.
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Hi Heather, good day! Sure, you can tell me about it. I know how it feels to be lied by someone you know. It really feels bad and it is a lesson for me not to do the same. I hope you won\'t do the same thing too. I\'ll see you in class. ~T. Lyn
Miss lynn I do not want to talk about my lies.
>>Miss. [Name], I don\'t want to talk about my lies.
Instead, I can tell you the biggest lie my friend had told to me.
>>Instead, I can tell you the biggest lie my friend has ever told me.
I was letting my friend borrow my tape.
>>Correct. I was lending my tape
After she used it, she just ran away with it.
>>Correct.
I then saw her putting the tape inside my best friend\'s backpack.
>>Then, I saw her putting the tape in my best friend\'s backpack.
Then she ran off.
>>And she ran away.
So I asked my best friend if I could look into her bag.
>>Correct.
She said yes.
>>Correct.
I was suddenly angry at my friend, (not my best friend) so I found her at her desk.
>>I suddenly got mad at my friend (not my best friend) and found her at her desk.
Then she lied, \"I put it at your desk! I never know your best friend too!\"
>>Then she told me her lies, that she put the tape on my desk and she doesn\'t eve know who my best friend is.
How mean is that?
>>Correct.
I cant belive it.
>>I can\'t believe what she said.
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