What’s the difference between how you spent weekends as a child and how you spend them now?

2026-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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When I was young, I went to the beach with my family and we set up a tent and spent night together. But now, we don\'t do that. I tend to travel alone or with my friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Susan!
I agree with you on this! When we were young, weekends would usually be spent with our family since we were too young to go out by ourselves. But now, that we can do it alone, we usually spend it with friends or alone.
- T. Caitlyn 
When I was young, I went to the beach with my family and we set up a tent and spent night together. 
>> When I was young, I went to the beach with my family, and we set up a tent and spent the night together.
But now, we don\'t do that.
>> CORRECT 
I tend to travel alone or with my friends.
>> CORRECT 

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