What’s the funniest thing that ever happened to you on vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
Two years ago,when I went to Spain Camino de Santoago
Our member of the oldest man liked me,
He came back Korea send me massage and expressed me interest in.
Now that I think about it,I just enjoyed a little bit .
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! Wow, that sounds like quite an experience! It’s funny how even small moments can end up being memorable. ^^ Thanks for taking the time to do your homework!
~T. Jewel
Two years ago,when I went to Spain Camino de Santoago
>>Two years ago, I went to Spain to walk the Camino de Santiago.
Our member of the oldest man liked me,
Our member of the oldest man liked me,
>>The oldest man in our group liked me.
He came back Korea send me massage and expressed me interest in.
He came back Korea send me massage and expressed me interest in.
>>He came back to Korea, sent me a message, and showed interest in me.
Now that I think about it,I just enjoyed a little bit .
Now that I think about it,I just enjoyed a little bit .
>>Now that I think about it, I enjoyed it a little.
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