What’s the funniest thing that’s ever happened to you while traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I travel in Spain, someone liked me,
He is Korean old boy and single and 17 years older than me.
his wife passed away 15years ago.
He was kind and well-mannered.
I don\'t like him and I refused.
I told him \" we are just friend\"
It is the funnist story ,^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! This story is very interesting! It\'s like something from a movie or a drama. ^^ Thank you for sharing it! Have a good day!
~T. Jewel
When I travel in Spain, someone liked me,
>>When I traveled to Spain, someone liked me.
OR
>>When I traveled to Spain, someone showed interest in me.
He is Korean old boy and single and 17 years older than me.
He is Korean old boy and single and 17 years older than me.
>>He is Korean, single, and 17 years older than me.
his wife passed away 15years ago.
his wife passed away 15years ago.
>>His wife passed away 15 years ago.
He was kind and well-mannered.
He was kind and well-mannered.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t like him and I refused.
I don\'t like him and I refused.
>>I don\'t like him, so I refused.
I told him \" we are just friend\"
I told him \" we are just friend\"
>>I told him, \'We are just friends.\'
It is the funnist story ,^^
It is the funnist story ,^^
>>It is the funniest story. ^^
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