What\'s the home appliance that you mostly use and why?
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I mostly use my computer. The corona pandemic gets longer and I spend many times at using computer. Also, I do online classes with my computer, so I use my computer longer.
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I mostly use my computer.
>> correct~~
The corona pandemic gets longer and I spend many times at using computer.
>> The corona pandemic has been going on for many months now and it\'s likely to last for a couple of years more that\'s why I spend most of my time using my computer.
Also, I do online classes with my computer, so I use my computer longer.
>> Also, I do online classes on my computer, so I use my computer longer.
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