What’s the most adventurous thing you’ve done or attempted?

2016-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am a person who is a little bit conservative when it comes to exploring adventurous things.For instance, when deciding a travel destination, I would rather prefer a safe and well-known city than explore a new place where it is mysterious and risky like African countries. When trying a new thing, I tend to weigh up all the pros and cons including the probability of success.It takes some time for me to make a decision on actually initiating a new thing. Once I start something, I continue persistently to get it done completely.I rarely give up along the way or halfway. However, being cautious is not always good. Believe it or not, making conservative moves may be the absolute worst thing for your career development.Most people are afraid of changes and stay in a comfortable zone. Without challenging, no development will be achieved. No pain, no gain. We sometimes need to be less prudent and be more aggressive when challenging a new thing. Just do it without thinking aout consequences.

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A wonderful afternoon Sir [이름]! Finally we are almost done with this week again. There are people who are really adventurous. Some of them try different activites such as extreme sports. However, there are also people who are a bit conservative. It depends on how the person accepts the challenges that come their way. Challenges make us into a better person. We just have to be careful when making decisions. Thanks for the great comsposition today. See you. Teacher Nina   I am a person who is a little bit conservative when it comes to exploring adventurous things. >> correct For instance, when deciding a travel destination, I would rather prefer a safe and well-known city than explore a new place where it is mysterious and risky like African countries. >> correct When trying a new thing, I tend to weigh up all the pros and cons including the probability of success. >> correct It takes some time for me to make a decision on actually initiating a new thing. >> correct Once I start something, I continue persistently to get it done completely. >> correct I rarely give up along the way or halfway. >> correct However, being cautious is not always good. >> correct Believe it or not, making conservative moves may be the absolute worst thing for your career development. >> correct Most people are afraid of changes and stay in a comfortable zone. >> correct Without challenging, no development will be achieved. >> Without challenge, no development will be achieved. >> OR: Without challenges, no development will be achieved No pain, no gain. >> correct We sometimes need to be less prudent and be more aggressive when challenging a new thing. >> correct Just do it without thinking aout consequences. >> correct ( spelling check: about ^^ )

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