What’s the most beautiful location you’ve visited?
학생이 쓴 원문
I visited Prague, Czech about 10 years ago.
I visited the most famous places in Prague such as Prague castle, Astronomical Clock Tower, Charles Bridge. It looked exotic and different from ours. The weather in October in Prague was also good. Everything in Prague looked wonderful to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. I visited the most famous places in Prague such as Prague castle, Astronomical Clock Tower, Charles Bridge.
Thank you for doing your homework~
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I visited Prague, Czech about 10 years ago.
>>I visited Prague, Czech, about 10 years ago.
2. I visited the most famous places in Prague such as Prague castle, Astronomical Clock Tower, Charles Bridge.
>>I visited the most famous places in Prague, such as Prague Castle, the Astronomical Clock Tower, and the Charles Bridge.
3. It looked exotic and different from ours.
>>It looked exotic and different from my own country.
4. The weather in October in Prague was also good.
>>The weather in Prague in October was also good.
5. Everything in Prague looked wonderful to me.
>>CORRECT!
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