What’s the most boring thing you have to do?

2018-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Stacy

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There are so many things that I don’t like but I have to do. One of the things, I think housework. It’s little bit ashamed, but I don’t like housework. Cleaning, laundry, dish-washing etc I don’t like all of them. But, I have to do them. It’s so contradiction, I don’t like housework, but I like well organized state. So, almost every day I clean my house. It’s very boring. But, after the cleaning when I see my well organized house, I feel very good. So, I think housework is so boring, but I have to do. Second, I think watching news program is so boring. My favorite TV program is variety show. When I see it, I don’t need to complicated thinks. I can just enjoy the program. But, When I watch the news program, I have to think about that, and get some information from that. I know it is so useful and help to live society. So, I always watch it. But It’s not funny. To be honest it’s very boring. But, housework or watching news more boring thing is housework.

강사 첨삭

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-T.STACY


There are so many things that I don’t like but I have to do.

There are so many things than I don\'t like to do but I need to do it.


One of the things, I think housework.

One of the things, I think is  doing some household chores.


It’s little bit ashamed, but I don’t like housework.

I\'m a bit ashamed to admit it but really I don\'t like doing some chores in the house. 


Cleaning, laundry, dish-washing etc I don’t like all of them. But, I have to do them.

I don\'t like cleaning, doing the laundry, washing the dishes and etc. But I have to do them.


It’s so contradiction, I don’t like housework, but I like well organized state.

It is so contradicting that I don\'t like doing house work but I like everything to be well organized.


almost every day I clean my house. It’s very boring. 

>>CORRECT


after the cleaning when I see my well organized house, I feel very good. So, I think housework is so boring, but I have to do.

But when I am done cleaning and I can see that everything is well organized, I feel so good. So in my opinion doing household chores is boring but I have to do it.


Second, I think watching news program is so boring. My favorite TV program is variety show.

>>CORRECT


When I see it, I don’t need to complicated thinks.

Every time I watch it I don\'t need to think really hard, I just enjoy the program.

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I can just enjoy the program. But, When I watch the news program, I have to think about that, and get some information from that.

>>CORRECT


I know It is so useful and help to live society. So, I always watch it. But It’s not funny. To be honest it’s very boring.  But, housework or watching news more boring thing is housework.

I know it is very useful and makes me aware of what\'s going on in the society. That\'s why I am watching it. But it is not fun. To be honest it is in fact very boring. Between doing household chores and watching the news, I think doing household chores is more boring.










  
  












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