What's the most dangerous piece of driving you've ever seen?

Good evening [이름]!

I am surprised! You sent me a composition tonight.

I think you are already done with your presentation, am I right?

Oh! You should be really careful when you drive.
Accidents happen unexpectedly. Good thing you were safe.

Take care on your way home, okay?

Teacher Nina

I was drinving my car in winter season.

>> I was driving my car in winter season.
the condition of road was not good, because it was snowy and the snow was accumulated slightly.
>> The condition of the road was not good, because it was snowing and the snow slightly accumulated the road.

>> OR: The condition of the road was not good because it was snowing.  

Many cars on the road were moving slowly and I was too.

>> My car and the other cars on the road moved slowly.
Suddenly, my car started spinning about 30 dgree.
>> Suddenly, my car started to turn about thirty degrees.  
I was astonished and tried to controll
>> I was astonished and tried to control it.  

Fortunatly, I could controll my car and there wasn\'t any car located in shory distance.
 >> Fortunately, I was able to control my car and there\'s wasn\'t any car that was near me.

Even I could feel spliping my car in a every moment.
>> I even felt that my car slipped at that moment.  

So I should focus on my driving.

>> So I should focus on driving.

Not far from my position, there was an accident of truck.
 >> Not far from my position, there was an accident and it was truck.

It seemed like truck sliped and crashed with guide wall.
>> It seemed like the truck slipped and crashed to the wall .

>> OR: It seemed like the truck slipped and crashed to the road barricades.

Since it was not a big crash, there is a little crack on the car
>> Since it was not a big crash, there was a little crack on the car.

>> OR: Since it was not a big collision, the car had a little crack.  

but that cause big traffic jam.
>> But that caused the traffic jam.
So, Whenever snow come down from sky, I avoid to driving my car.

>> So, whenever it snows, I avoid using my car.