What's the most difficult decision you've made in the last two years and how did you come to that de
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Wow! That was a tough decision.
I can still remember when we discussed about this matter in class.
You explained to me the disadvantages of it.
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Teacher Nina
My employees have been working in the same jobs for too long time like more than 10 years.
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The problem was that they were so accustomed to doing their jobs that they felt too comfortable and were not motivated to challenge other things or to do things more efficiently, productively and creatively.
>> The problem was that they were so accustomed in doing their jobs that they felt too comfortable and were not motivated to challenge other things or to do things more efficiently, productively and creatively.
So, I planned on implementing a job rotation among employees so that they can experience others jobs.
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I believed that it would definitely help them think out of the box.
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But there was a problem with executing the plan.
>> But there was a problem in executing the plan.
The position of customer complaint resolution manager was not preferred by anyone.
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No one was interested in taking on the job.
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So, as a solution, I convened a team meeting and announced that if no one did not volunteer, I would pick up someone.
>> So, as a solution, I convened a team meeting and announced that if no one will volunteer, I would pick someone.
I had to take a risk of loosing my team member.
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Thinking hard, I came up with an idea that anyone who wanted to get a promotion, he/she should take on the job for at least two years.
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I made a difficult decision andchose an employee.
>> I made a difficult decision in choosing an employee.
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