What\'s the most exciting musical instrument to play? Why?
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My favorite instrument is a pinao.
Piano can sound a melody and harmony at the sametime.
However, most instruments can play only one at the sametime.
So, piano\'s sound is more richer than anothr instruments.
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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
My favorite instrument is a pinao.
>> My favorite instrument is the piano.
Piano can sound a melody and harmony at the sametime.
>> The piano can produce both melody and harmony at the same time.
However, most instruments can play only one at the sametime.
>> However, most instruments can play only one at a time.
So, piano\'s sound is more richer than anothr instruments.
>> That\'s why the piano\'s sound is richer than that of other instruments.
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