What’s the most exciting project you’ve worked on so far?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a many experience about work project.
Among them, most exciting project is making a new system. It\'s in progress now.
There are some reasons that i choose this project.
For Making a new system was required many role of department.
So i studying other department job. Getting a new knowledge is very difficult.
But, In the future, when i will do new project, It will be feel so easy.
I think It is very important to do my best right now.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. You\'re doing a great job expressing your thoughts on your project. I made some adjustments for better clarity and grammar. Your enthusiasm for learning and improving is impressive. Keep up the great work!
~ T. Lia
I have a many experience about work project.
>> I have a lot of experience with work projects.
Among them, most exciting project is making a new system. It\'s in progress now.
>> Among them, the most exciting project is developing a new system, which is currently in progress.
There are some reasons that i choose this project.
>> There are several reasons why I chose this project.
For Making a new system was required many role of department.
>> Developing a new system requires the involvement of multiple departments.
So i studying other department job.
>> So, I am studying the roles of other departments.
Getting a new knowledge is very difficult.
>> Gaining new knowledge is challenging.
But, In the future, when i will do new project, It will be feel so easy.
>> However, in the future, when I work on a new project, it will feel much easier.
I think It is very important to do my best right now.
>> I believe it is very important to do my best right now.
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