What\'s the most exciting thing you did with your classmates?
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On July, I played baseball game with my classmates. It was exciting. The game was difficult for me, but I was so happy that I played enjoyable.
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On July, I played baseball game with my classmates.
>> In July, I played baseball game with my classmates.
It was exciting.
>> correct
The game was difficult for me, but I was so happy that I played enjoyable.
>> The game was difficult for me, but I was so happy that I had an enjoyable time.
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