What's the most expensive piece of clothing you have ever bought?
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I have many clothings in my closet. these are not expensive because I bought it when I was a cadet.( cadet get too little money to buy a cloth )
Everage price of my cloth is about 30000\ or less than that.
My T-shirts costs about 5000~15000. But the cost is high when it comes to special Brand. I have a one "Guess" T-shirt which cost above 20000\.
My everage cost rise up becase of my suit. I have two suits and the first one costs about 500000 \ and second one is 200000\. these are really expensive for me to buy, so my parents bought it for me. Except these suit, I have pants which cost 100000\.
it's for summer season. it is long pants but really thin and comfortable.
I think it deserve it. Specially In summer season, I chage my cloth more periodically than winter season. I have more summer cloth than winter one.
In recently, I found that I'm still growing up. because the size of my cloth is getting uncomfortable for me. Maybe, I should get some new clothes
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Hi!
Wow! I was surprised with the price of your clothes. Hihihi!
I think you love shopping, am I right?
Guess is really a famous brand.
We should also treat ourselves sometimes because we work hard.
I want to go shopping in Korea. ^_^
Talk to you soon!Teacher Nina
I have many clothings in my closet. these are not expensive because I bought it when I was a cadet.( cadet get too little money to buy a cloth )
>> I have many clothes in my closet. These are not expensive because it bought it when I was still a cadet. ( A cadet receives little amount of money to buy a clothing.)
>> OR: I have a lot of clothes in my closet. These are not expensive because it bought it when I was still a cadet. ( A cadet receives little amount of money to buy clothes. )Everage price of my cloth is about 30000 or less than that.
>> The average price of my clothes is about 30000 or less. ( spelling check: average ^^) My T-shirts costs about 5000~15000.
>> The cost of my t-shirts is about 5000~15000.
But the cost is high when it comes to special Brand.
>> But the price is high when it comes to special brands.
I have a one \"Guess\" T-shirt which cost above 20000.
>> I have a \"Guess\" t-shirt that costs higher than 20000.
>> OR: I have a \"Guess\" shirt that costs that costs more than 20000.My everage cost rise up becase of my suit.
>> The average cost increased because of my suit.
I have two suits and the first one costs about 500000 and second one is 200000.
>> Correct
>> OR: I have two suits that costs about 500000 and 200000.
these are really expensive for me to buy, so my parents bought it for me.
>> Correct
Except these suit, I have pants which cost 100000.
>> Except those suits, I have a pair of pants which costs 100000.it\'s for summer season.
>> Correct
it is long pants but really thin and comfortable.
>> Correct
>> OR: It is a long pants and really comfortable for me/ I think it deserve it.
>> Correct
Specially In summer season, I chage my cloth more periodically than winter season.
>> Did you mean: Especially in summer season, I have to change my clothing periodically.
I have more summer cloth than winter one.
>> I have more summer clothes than winter ones. In recently, I found that I\'m still growing up.
>> Recently, I found that I\'m still growing up.
because the size of my cloth is getting uncomfortable for me.
>> Because my clothes are becoming uncomfortable for me.
>> OR: Because my clothes are becoming smaller.
Maybe, I should get some new clothes
>> Correct
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