What\'s the most fun water activity for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usally swim in the pool But I think the most fun water activity is snorkeling.
I used snorkel once it felt great. If I use a snorkel it doesn\'t get water in my nose and open my eyes comfortably.
And I can see well in the water.
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Jean~~
What\'s the most fun water activity for you?
I usally swim in the pool But I think the most fun water activity is snorkeling.
>> I usually swim in the pool, but I think the most fun water activity is snorkeling.
I used snorkel once it felt great.
>> I used a snorkel once and it felt great.
>> OR: I went snorkeling once and I felt great.
If I use a snorkel it doesn\'t get water in my nose and open my eyes comfortably.
>> If I use a snorkel, water doesn’t get into my nose and I can open my eyes comfortably.
And I can see well in the water.
>> CORRECT ~~
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