What\'s the most fun you\'ve had while studying?

2022-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Gela

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Imagining is the most fun. Sometimes, I imagine what to do after studying. Always, studying is not easy for me. However, imagining makes me get power. For example, I imagine me watching a movie or eating some snacks. Sometimes, I imagine living my own life. I think that many people agree with my thought. There are many days when I want to give up. However, I want to overcome it. With many ways to make me happy, I hope that I overcome it.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kimberly!


Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Please know that it is normal to get distracted while studying ^^ It is great that you are motivated to study well. Do not forget to reward yourself after a long study session. Also, I completely agree when you mentioned imagining living your own life. In a way, we are thinking of how our hardwork will pay off in the future.


You are an inspiring model student! Keep it up! 


~ Teacher Gela 


Imagining is the most fun.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Daydreaming is the most fun.

Sometimes, I imagine what to do after studying.

>>CORRECT

Always, studying is not easy for me.

>> Studying is not always easy for me.

However, imagining makes me get power.

>>CORRECT

OR >> However, imagining makees me energized.

OR >> Studying is not always easy for me; however, imagining makes me energized.

For example, I imagine me watching a movie or eating some snacks.

>> For example, I imagine myself watching a movie or eating some snacks.

Sometimes, I imagine living my own life.

>>CORRECT

I think that many people agree with my thought.

>>CORRECT

There are many days when I want to give up.

>>CORRECT

However, I want to overcome it.

>>CORRECT

OR >> There are many days when I want to give up; however, I want to overcome it.

With many ways to make me happy, I hope that I overcome it.

>> With many ways to make myself happy, I hope that I overcome it.

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