What\'s the most fun you\'ve had while studying?
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강사 첨삭
Hello, Kimberly!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Please know that it is normal to get distracted while studying ^^ It is great that you are motivated to study well. Do not forget to reward yourself after a long study session. Also, I completely agree when you mentioned imagining living your own life. In a way, we are thinking of how our hardwork will pay off in the future.
You are an inspiring model student! Keep it up!
~ Teacher Gela
Imagining is the most fun.
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OR >> Daydreaming is the most fun.
Sometimes, I imagine what to do after studying.
>>CORRECT
Always, studying is not easy for me.
>> Studying is not always easy for me.
However, imagining makes me get power.
>>CORRECT
OR >> However, imagining makees me energized.
OR >> Studying is not always easy for me; however, imagining makes me energized.
For example, I imagine me watching a movie or eating some snacks.
>> For example, I imagine myself watching a movie or eating some snacks.
Sometimes, I imagine living my own life.
>>CORRECT
I think that many people agree with my thought.
>>CORRECT
There are many days when I want to give up.
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However, I want to overcome it.
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OR >> There are many days when I want to give up; however, I want to overcome it.
With many ways to make me happy, I hope that I overcome it.
>> With many ways to make myself happy, I hope that I overcome it.
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