What’s the most important date in your calendar and why?

2024-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jewel

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My the most important date is September 18th because It is my birthday We commonly go to the form on the weekend, because It give us comfort

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Hi, [이름] [이름]! Our birthdays are special days. I hope you always spend yours well with your family. Have a great day today! ^^
~T. Jewel
My the most important date is September 18th because It is my birthday
>>The most important date in my calendar is September 18th because it is my birthday.
We commonly go to the form on the weekend, because It give us comfort
>>We usually go to the farm on the weekend because it gives us comfort.

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