What's the most important Korean event in your country?

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I would love to go back from being a child to experience this wonderful tradition of yours. Plus, I can receive money from the elderly. Ha! Ha! Ha! See you.

~Teacher Eunice

Korean New Year is the first day of Lunar calendar.

>>> Korean New Year is the first day of the Lunar calendar.  

It is the most important event in Korea.

>>> Correct!

People usually visit their parents and eat special food that is rice cake soup is called \"Duckkuk\", then demonstrate their respect to parents by special bow.

>>> People usually visit their parents and eat special foods like the rice cake soup called \"Duckkuk\", then show their respect to their parents by bowing to them.  

Children expect to receive money from relatives after performing a formal bow, so elders usually prepare special money for them that is the money just issued.

>>> Children expect to receive money from the relatives after performing a formal bow, so elders usually prepare some money for the children.

Adults always visit a bank to exchange new money.

>>> Adults always visit a bank to exchange a new money.  

Unless they go to the bank early, they can\'t get money because everybody would like to have it. 

>>> Sometimes, they can\'t get a new money because everybody would like to have it, unless they will go to the bank early. 

It is shame that some people go abroad for taking a trip during a long holiday instead visit their parents. 

>>> It is a shame that some people take a trip abroad during a long holiday instead of visiting their parents. 
 Because we only have few chances to get together and have a time with all family members.

>>>  Because we only have a few chances to get together and have a time with all our family members.
I want people to keep celebrating our special tradition instead doing other things.

>>> I want people to keep celebrating our special traditions instead of doing other things.