What\'s the most important lesson you have learned from your parents?

2022-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I learned the personality from my parents. They really emphasized it to me. and then I learned that people need to be humble to find something to learn from others. so I have a habit of greeting well.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic! 

Being polite shows respect towards other people. It\'s always a good habit.

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I learned the personality from my parents. 
>> I learned a certain personality from my parents. 

They really emphasized it to me. 
>> CORRECT

and then I learned that people need to be humble to find something to learn from others. so I have a habit of greeting well.
>> I learned that people need to be humble in terms of learning from others so I have this habit of being polite. 

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