What\'s the most important thing to do to handle and accept change in today\'s fast-paced world?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most important thing is a heart of acceptance.
If some situation or system change, we should learn how to use or cope about them, not ignore. And we should share about them.
For example, the KIOSK and mobile application order system become common, a lot of restaurants or cafes use this system. But oldery people who aren\'t familiar with it are feel hard, and reluctant to go outside.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Hyebin. Your insights on accepting change and adapting to new situations are spot-on. Sharing and understanding advancements, like the KIOSK system, are crucial in today\'s fast-paced world. Well said, Hyebin. Thanks for this. I hope you had fun on your day off.
~T. Jade^^
Homework: What\'s the most important thing to do to handle and accept change in today\'s fast-paced world?
The most important thing is a heart of acceptance.
>> Correct
If some situation or system change, we should learn how to use or cope about them, not ignore.
>> If a situation or system changes, we should learn how to use or cope with them, not ignore them.
And we should share about them.
>> And we should share information about them.
For example, the KIOSK and mobile application order system become common, a lot of restaurants or cafes use this system.
>> For example, the kiosk and mobile application order system has become common; a lot of restaurants or cafes use this system.
But oldery people who aren\'t familiar with it are feel hard, and reluctant to go outside.
>> But older people who aren\'t familiar with it feel it is difficult and are reluctant to go outside.
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