What's the most inspiring book you have ever read?

2015-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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One of the most inspiring book for me is 'The Shell seekers' by Rosamunde Pilcher. It is a story about an woman who had had a difficult life but had accepted her situation and had tried to enjoy her life. And she looked down on a snob and repected her own life style. She didn't care about the other's point of view, but she lived her life hard. She put her mind to her life. This book showed me the way how we should live and the goal of our life. The last part if this book is about her old age. When she had recongnized that she didn't have much life, she decided the travel to her home town 'CONWALL'with her kids. But no one didn't want to go with her.So she went to travel with the guys who had helped her She made it very luxourious for the first time and last time in her life. And after that travel, she died peacefully. This is a warm hearted story. Thank you

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Hello Ma\'am [이름]! Thank you for sharing that very touching story. It is indeed very inspiring.^^ Thank you for sharing it with me. ~Kelly^^ One of the most inspiring book for me is \'The Shell seekers\' by Rosamunde Pilcher. >> One of the most inspiring books for me is \'The Shell seekers\' by Rosamunde Pilcher. It is a story about an woman who had had a difficult life but had accepted her situation and had tried to enjoy her life.>> It is a story about a woman who had had a difficult life but had accepted her situation and had tried to enjoy her life. And she looked down on a snob and repected her own life style. >>She became snob and repected her own life style. She didn\'t care about the other\'s point of view, but she lived her life hard. >> She didn\'t care about the other\'s point of view, but she lived a hard life.She put her mind to her life. >> She focused on her life.This book showed me the way how we should live and the goal of our life. >>This book showed me the way how we should live our lives and how to focus with our goal in life. The last part if this book is about her old age. >> The last part of this book is about her old age. When she had recongnized that she didn\'t have much life, she decided the travel to her home town \'CONWALL\'with her kids. >> When she had recongnized that she didn\'t have much life, she decided to travel to her home town called \'CONWALL\'with her kids. But no one didn\'t want to go with her. >> Correct. So she went to travel with the guys who had helped her >>So she traveled with the guys who helped her.She made it very luxourious for the first time and last time in her life. >> She made her first and last travel very luxurious. And after that travel, she died peacefully. >> Correct.This is a warm hearted story. >> Correct.Thank you >> Correct.

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