What's the most inspiring book you have ever read?
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These days, I sometimes read a book when I take a rest but when I was young, I read far more books than now. I really read a book almost once a week. Of course, I try to read a book as many as possible, but there is no enough time to do that because I have to spend most of my time doing other things.
Anyway, I have read a lot of books and the genre of the books is also very diverse. When a child, I enjoyed reading a history book about Korea, especially the Joseon Dynasty. I don't know why I like that subject but at that time it seemed to be useful and interesting.
However, the most inspiring book I have ever read is Harry Potter. I read it when in middle and high school. Once I began to read it, I often stayed up all night. Mysterious Hogwarts school, fascinating magic spell and adventure story of the main characteristics captured my heart. Of course, I knew it was impossible, but really wanted to spend my school life in Hogwarts school. The Harry Potter is the best book to me.
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Hello Miss [이름]!
Thank you for your time in finishing your homework. It’s no secret that reading increases your vocabulary and improves your spelling. So enjoy your spare time by reading your favorite book. I\'m glad that we both like Harry Potter. Maybe, we can talk more about it in class.^^
~Kelly^^
These days, I sometimes read a book when I take a rest but when I was young, I read far more books than now.
>> These days, I sometimes read a book when I take a rest but when I was young, I have read more books.
I really read a book almost once a week.
>> Correct.
Of course, I try to read a book as many as possible, but there is no enough time to do that because I have to spend most of my time doing other things.
>> Of course, I try to read as many books as possible but there is no enough time to do that because I have to spend most of my time in doing other things. Anyway, I have read a lot of books and the genre of the books is also very diverse.
>> Anyway, I have read a lot of books with diverse genres.
When a child, I enjoyed reading a history book about Korea, especially the Joseon Dynasty.
>> When I was a child, I enjoyed reading history books about Korea, especially the Joseon Dynasty.
I don\'t know why I like that subject but at that time it seemed to be useful and interesting.
>> I don\'t know why I liked that subject but at that time it seemed to be useful and interesting.
However, the most inspiring book I have ever read is Harry Potter.
>> Correct.
I read it when in middle and high school.
>> I read it when I was in middle school and high school.
Once I began to read it, I often stayed up all night.
>> Correct.
Mysterious Hogwarts school, fascinating magic spell and adventure story of the main characteristics captured my heart.
>> The mysterious Hogwarts school, fascinating magic spell and the adventure story of the main characters captured my heart.
Of course, I knew it was impossible, but really wanted to spend my school life in Hogwarts school.
>> Of course, I knew that it was impossible, but I really wanted to spend my school life in Hogwarts school.
The Harry Potter is the best book to me.
>> The book of Harry Potter is the best book to me.
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