What’s the most interesting building you’ve ever seen or been in?
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Hello Sir [이름]!
Thanks for dropping by the board. I must agree that Burk Khalifa is one of the most jaw dropping skyscrapers in the metropolitan of Dubai. You\'re very fortunate to witness the beauty of this country. There\'s more on what meets the eye. Very good sentences, keep it up!
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The most interesting building I have been in is the Buj Khalifa located in Dubai in UAE.
>> Correct!
I have visited that building many times when I was living in UAE for shopping, sight seeing and eating.
>> I had visited that building frequently for shopping, sight seeing and eating when I was living in the UAE.
This building is the highest buliding in the world.
>> This is the highest buliding in the world.
I felt like that human is able to be possible something looks like impossible.
>> I think human is able to make something impossible.
>> Humans can achieve greater heights in life.
The weather in UAE is extremely hot, so I and my family was not able to stay outside to enjoy the city scene.
>> The weather in UAE is extremely hot, so my family and I was not able to stay outside to enjoy the scenery in the city.
But I can confidently say that the Buj khalifa building is the most beautiful building I have ever seen.
>> Correct!
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