What\'s the most memorable adventure you\'ve had with friends?
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when I and my friend went to bohol for scuberdiving.
The blue coral and the sea were so beautiful and I was captivated by the charm of the sea.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow, that sounds like an amazing experience! Bohol is such a beautiful place to explore, especially with all the stunning underwater scenery!
~Kelly
when I and my friend went to bohol for scuberdiving.
>> When my friend and I went to Bohol for scuba diving.
The blue coral and the sea were so beautiful and I was captivated by the charm of the sea.
>> Correct
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>> The blue coral and the sea were stunning, and I was mesmerized by the sea\'s beauty.
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