What’s the most memorable family gathering you’ve attended?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can remeber the family gathering.
My grandfather past away on end of the april. so my family gather every April.
We have had memorial time for my grandfather and grandmother.
강사 첨삭
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I can remeber the family gathering.
>> I can remember the family gathering.
OR >> I still recall the family gathering.
My grandfather past away on end of the april. so my family gather every April.
>> My grandfather passed away at the end of April, so my family gathers every April.
We have had memorial time for my grandfather and grandmother.
>> We have a memorial time for both my grandfather and grandmother.
>> I can remember the family gathering.
OR >> I still recall the family gathering.
My grandfather past away on end of the april. so my family gather every April.
>> My grandfather passed away at the end of April, so my family gathers every April.
We have had memorial time for my grandfather and grandmother.
>> We have a memorial time for both my grandfather and grandmother.
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