What\'s the most memorable sleepover you\'ve experienced?

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1. The last day of 2017, I slept over in my bestie\'s place with my school mates who has known for more than 10 years.

>>On the last day of 2017, I slept over in my bestie\'s place with my schoolmates whom I\'ve known for more than 10 years.
2. We\'ve ordered a lot of delivered foods and decorated house with balloons.

>>We ordered a lot of delivered foods and decorated the house with balloons.
3. We watched TV shows, talked about our uni life and drunk.

>>We watched TV shows, talked about our university life and got drunk.
4. And we planned to see sunrise of first day of New year.

>>We also planned to watch the sunrise of the first day of the New Year.
5. But nobody woke up on time.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Despite the plan, nobody woke up on time.
6. Suddenly I felt like I got fever and felt bad in the morning, I went to hospital and got an injection.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I suddenly contracted a fever and felt unwell that morning so I went to the hospital and got an injection.
7. It was a impressing memory but not a good start of New year.

>>It was an impressive memory but not a good start of the New Year.