What`s the most memorable vacation you`ve had?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ve been to Turkey three years ago. I was taken a hot air-balloon at cappadocia. Seeing to rise sun in the sky was blast. I\'ve forgot that I had coffee and tea, and looked Aegean sea with my wife. That`s I\'ve had most my memorable vacation.
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Hi Huje,
Thank you for today\'s homework!
Please keep up the good work!
Enjoy your Friday and talk to you next week!
Teacher Elly.
What`s the most memorable vacation you`ve had?
I\'ve been to Turkey three years ago.
CORRECT!
or>>I have visited Turkey three years ago.
I was taken a hot air-balloon at cappadocia.
>>I rode a hot air-balloon in Cappadocia.
Seeing to rise sun in the sky was blast.
>>Watching the rising of the sun in the sky was a blast.
I\'ve forgot that I had coffee and tea, and looked Aegean sea with my wife.
>>I\'ve forgotten that I had coffee and tea, while I watched the Aegean sea with my wife.
That`s I\'ve had most my memorable vacation.
>>That was my most memorable vacation.
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